The crit groups started the day, like the others, after which Teresa Nielsen Hayden gave a lecture on exposition. A most wonderful lecture, I might add. I’ll type up a few tidbits from that when I have more time. Again, we broke for lunch, then I met with Laura for an hour one-on-one, and she gave me her thoughts on my story as well. Unlike everyone else, she loved the story, including the [tragic] ending, but she would also like to see me implement Steve’s suggestion.
After that, I was free for the rest of the day/evening, but I still had my short story to write, plus critique two stories for tomorrow morning. And I have one more left, so I’d better get to it!